The Criterion 2 section looks really good. Still reading the last part of it.
Rhonda, 401 - days ago
Criterion 2: Reading through the first time and a few grammatical items caught my attention. I copied the statements from the writing and pasted them below with the page number.
I know so much more about MNU and everyone's contribution after reading this!
the five signature commentments pg 55, line 6
technology plan to addresses the particular requirements pg 59, line 5
Not consistent between multicultural(without hyphen) or multi-cultural (with hyphen)pg 62-63
In spite of this, MidAmerica has perservered to Pg 65 Core B
Pg 67-missing period at end of statement #1
President’s Cabinets requests pg 67, #3
Pg 70-missing period at end of statement #2
Pg 71-should the percentages listed be out to the same decimal for consistency? Should "SSI" be defined or spelled out at least the first time it is mentioned?
Pg 73 has repeated information already stated on pg 71
ensure this shortfall does occur again pg 81 Statement #2 (does not?)
mford65, 397 - days ago
***the five signature commentments pg 55, line 6 THIS ERROR HAS BEEN CORRECTED. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 397 - days ago
***technology plan to addresses the particular requirements pg 59, line 5 THIS ERROR HAS BEEN CORRECTED. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 397 - days ago
***Not consistent between multicultural(without hyphen) or multi-cultural (with hyphen)pg 62-63 THIS HAS BEEN MADE CONSISTENT. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 397 - days ago
***In spite of this, MidAmerica has perservered to Pg 65 Core B THIS ERROR HAS BEEN CORRECTED. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 397 - days ago
***Pg 67-missing period at end of statement #1 DONE. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 397 - days ago
***President’s Cabinets requests pg 67, #3 THIS HAS BEEN CORRECTED. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 397 - days ago
***Pg 67-missing period at end of statement #1. DONE. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 397 - days ago
***Pg 71-should the percentages listed be out to the same decimal for consistency? Should "SSI" be defined or spelled out at least the first time it is mentioned? THIS CHANGE HAS BEEN IMPLEMENTED. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 397 - days ago
***ensure this shortfall does occur again pg 81 Statement #2 (does not?) THIS CHANGE HAS BEEN MADE. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 397 - days ago
***Pg 73 has repeated information already stated on pg 71 WE COULD NOT FIND THE REPEATED INFORMATION.***
Bill, 397 - days ago
Pg 55, 3rd paragraph, line 7 I think should read "potentially moving one IN four Board Meetings" instead of "one of the four"
Pg 55, 4th Paragraph, 1st line delete "sub" committee of and add "the" Board of Trustees.
Pg 61 2nd full Paragraph, last line should be "Residence Hall Council (RHC)" noy Government.
Pg 63 1st line add "as" "social justice causes such AS the MNU AIDS project."
Pg 66 2nd line add "In 2004" at the beginning of the sentence that reads "A part time payroll associate. . . " Also add new sentence to paragraph "The payroll associate position went to a full time position in the summer of 2008 due to the increased work load in HR and the need for additional accounting support."
Pg 68 last line delete "$1 million in a loan to the MNU Foundation"
Pg 70 Physical Resources paragraph, 3rd line should be 105 acres, not 185
Pg 83 Opportunities #2, The SPC has been disbanded and I don't believe we addressed the benchmarking area.
Should the layoffs in March be mentioned in the Financial Plan on page 68?
Bill Clair, 397 - days ago
Mark, The comments above submitted by Bill Clair
mford65, 394 - days ago
***Pg 55, 3rd paragraph, line 7 I think should read "potentially moving one IN four Board Meetings" instead of "one of the four" THIS HAS BEEN UPDATED. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 394 - days ago
***Pg 55, 4th Paragraph, 1st line delete "sub" committee of and add "the" Board of Trustees. THIS CHANGE HAS BEEN MADE. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 394 - days ago
***Pg 61 2nd full Paragraph, last line should be "Residence Hall Council (RHC)" noy Government. DONE. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 394 - days ago
***Pg 63 1st line add "as" "social justice causes such AS the MNU AIDS project." THIS MISTAKE HAS BEEN CORRECTED. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 394 - days ago
***Pg 66 2nd line add "In 2004" at the beginning of the sentence that reads "A part time payroll associate. . . " Also add new sentence to paragraph "The payroll associate position went to a full time position in the summer of 2008 due to the increased work load in HR and the need for additional accounting support." THIS SUGGESTION HAS BEEN IMPLEMENTED. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 394 - days ago
***Pg 70 Physical Resources paragraph, 3rd line should be 105 acres, not 185 CORRECTION MADE. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 394 - days ago
***Pg 83 Opportunities #2, The SPC has been disbanded and I don't believe we addressed the benchmarking area. THIS STATEMENT HAS BEEN AMENDED. THANK YOU.***
mford65, 394 - days ago
***Should the layoffs in March be mentioned in the Financial Plan on page 68? IT WAS REFERRED TO BRIEFLY IN THE STATEMENT "ADJUSTING OUR WORKFORCE" ON PAGE 68. I'M SURE THAT THE COMMISSION WILL BE INTERESTED IN THIS. IF YOU HAVE NUMBERS THAT CAN BE SHARED (NOT NAMES) PLEASE E-MAIL THEM TO ME.***
traber, 380 - days ago
Chapter 4, page 84: #8 under "Opportunities" the word "to" needs to be added in "University must continue ___ address student".
mgillila@mnu.edu, 378 - days ago
P. 56, paragraph 2, line 2: This statement makes it sound as though moving Student or Campus Counseling to Student Development was a recent move. It was not. Campus/Student Counseling has always been under Student Development; moving counseling to the Student Life Center to create the Wellness Center is new effective this fall. Hope this makes sense. mg
Jan Batley, 373 - days ago
Page 57 "Strategic Planning Committee" is the heading for the paragraph, but "Strategic Positioning Committee" is referred to in the paragraph.
Jan Batley, 373 - days ago
pg 58. Second sentence following the chart sounds awkward. "The presentation of the Strategic Positioning Committee reports to the Board influences future planning." Does it need to be reworded?
Jan Batley, 373 - days ago
Pg 64. Is the Statement of Community Covenant quoted correctly -(8) adhere to the lifestyle guidelines as state (should be stated?) in the Student Handbook.
Lois Perrigo, 372 - days ago
The chart with full time and part time faculty shows 97 part time faculty. Is part time and adjunct the same? How many adjunct teach for MNU.
Should the information about Pioneer marketing be updated?
CO-CHAIRS, 372 - days ago
***Chapter 4, page 84: #8 under "Opportunities" the word "to" needs to be added in "University must continue ___ address student". THIS CORRECTION HAS BEEN MADE. THANK YOU.***
CO-CHAIRS, 372 - days ago
***P. 56, paragraph 2, line 2: This statement makes it sound as though moving Student or Campus Counseling to Student Development was a recent move. It was not. Campus/Student Counseling has always been under Student Development; moving counseling to the Student Life Center to create the Wellness Center is new effective this fall. Hope this makes sense. mg THIS SECTION HAS BEEN RE-WORDED.***
CO-CHAIRS, 372 - days ago
Page 57 "Strategic Planning Committee" is the heading for the paragraph, but "Strategic Positioning Committee" is referred to in the paragraph. pg 58. Second sentence following the chart sounds awkward. "The presentation of the Strategic Positioning Committee reports to the Board influences future planning." Does it need to be reworded? THIS SECTION HAS BEEN RE-WORDED. THANK YOU.
Co-Chairs, 372 - days ago
***Pg 64. Is the Statement of Community Covenant quoted correctly -(8) adhere to the lifestyle guidelines as state (should be stated?) in the Student Handbook. THIS CORRECTION HAS BEEN MADE. THANK YOU.***
CO-CHAIRS, 372 - days ago
***The chart with full time and part time faculty shows 97 part time faculty. Is part time and adjunct the same? How many adjunct teach for MNU. THIS CHART HAS BEEN UPDATED WITH FALL 2008 STATISTICS. THERE ARE 84 FULL-TIME AND 99 PART-TIME FACULTY. FULL-TIME ARE THE RANKED FACULTY. ALL OTHERS ARE CLASSIFIED AS PART-TIME.***
CO-CHAIRS, 372 - days ago
***Should the information about Pioneer marketing be updated? THIS SECTION HAS BE RE-WORDED. THANK YOU.***
Jan Batley, 371 - days ago
Chpt 4, pg 84, #8 -...must continue address... should be ...must continue to address..?
The Criterion 2 section looks really good. Still reading the last part of it.
Criterion 2: Reading through the first time and a few grammatical items caught my attention. I copied the statements from the writing and pasted them below with the page number.
I know so much more about MNU and everyone's contribution after reading this!
the five signature commentments pg 55, line 6
technology plan to addresses the particular requirements pg 59, line 5
Not consistent between multicultural(without hyphen) or multi-cultural (with hyphen)pg 62-63
In spite of this, MidAmerica has perservered to Pg 65 Core B
Pg 67-missing period at end of statement #1
President’s Cabinets requests pg 67, #3
Pg 70-missing period at end of statement #2
Pg 71-should the percentages listed be out to the same decimal for consistency? Should "SSI" be defined or spelled out at least the first time it is mentioned?
Pg 73 has repeated information already stated on pg 71
ensure this shortfall does occur again pg 81 Statement #2 (does not?)
***the five signature commentments pg 55, line 6 THIS ERROR HAS BEEN CORRECTED. THANK YOU.***
***technology plan to addresses the particular requirements pg 59, line 5 THIS ERROR HAS BEEN CORRECTED. THANK YOU.***
***Not consistent between multicultural(without hyphen) or multi-cultural (with hyphen)pg 62-63 THIS HAS BEEN MADE CONSISTENT. THANK YOU.***
***In spite of this, MidAmerica has perservered to Pg 65 Core B THIS ERROR HAS BEEN CORRECTED. THANK YOU.***
***Pg 67-missing period at end of statement #1 DONE. THANK YOU.***
***President’s Cabinets requests pg 67, #3 THIS HAS BEEN CORRECTED. THANK YOU.***
***Pg 67-missing period at end of statement #1. DONE. THANK YOU.***
***Pg 71-should the percentages listed be out to the same decimal for consistency? Should "SSI" be defined or spelled out at least the first time it is mentioned? THIS CHANGE HAS BEEN IMPLEMENTED. THANK YOU.***
***ensure this shortfall does occur again pg 81 Statement #2 (does not?) THIS CHANGE HAS BEEN MADE. THANK YOU.***
***Pg 73 has repeated information already stated on pg 71 WE COULD NOT FIND THE REPEATED INFORMATION.***
Pg 55, 3rd paragraph, line 7 I think should read "potentially moving one IN four Board Meetings" instead of "one of the four"
Pg 55, 4th Paragraph, 1st line delete "sub" committee of and add "the" Board of Trustees.
Pg 61 2nd full Paragraph, last line should be "Residence Hall Council (RHC)" noy Government.
Pg 63 1st line add "as" "social justice causes such AS the MNU AIDS project."
Pg 66 2nd line add "In 2004" at the beginning of the sentence that reads "A part time payroll associate. . . " Also add new sentence to paragraph "The payroll associate position went to a full time position in the summer of 2008 due to the increased work load in HR and the need for additional accounting support."
Pg 68 last line delete "$1 million in a loan to the MNU Foundation"
Pg 70 Physical Resources paragraph, 3rd line should be 105 acres, not 185
Pg 83 Opportunities #2, The SPC has been disbanded and I don't believe we addressed the benchmarking area.
Should the layoffs in March be mentioned in the Financial Plan on page 68?
Mark, The comments above submitted by Bill Clair
***Pg 55, 3rd paragraph, line 7 I think should read "potentially moving one IN four Board Meetings" instead of "one of the four" THIS HAS BEEN UPDATED. THANK YOU.***
***Pg 55, 4th Paragraph, 1st line delete "sub" committee of and add "the" Board of Trustees. THIS CHANGE HAS BEEN MADE. THANK YOU.***
***Pg 61 2nd full Paragraph, last line should be "Residence Hall Council (RHC)" noy Government. DONE. THANK YOU.***
***Pg 63 1st line add "as" "social justice causes such AS the MNU AIDS project." THIS MISTAKE HAS BEEN CORRECTED. THANK YOU.***
***Pg 66 2nd line add "In 2004" at the beginning of the sentence that reads "A part time payroll associate. . . " Also add new sentence to paragraph "The payroll associate position went to a full time position in the summer of 2008 due to the increased work load in HR and the need for additional accounting support." THIS SUGGESTION HAS BEEN IMPLEMENTED. THANK YOU.***
***Pg 70 Physical Resources paragraph, 3rd line should be 105 acres, not 185 CORRECTION MADE. THANK YOU.***
***Pg 83 Opportunities #2, The SPC has been disbanded and I don't believe we addressed the benchmarking area. THIS STATEMENT HAS BEEN AMENDED. THANK YOU.***
***Should the layoffs in March be mentioned in the Financial Plan on page 68? IT WAS REFERRED TO BRIEFLY IN THE STATEMENT "ADJUSTING OUR WORKFORCE" ON PAGE 68. I'M SURE THAT THE COMMISSION WILL BE INTERESTED IN THIS. IF YOU HAVE NUMBERS THAT CAN BE SHARED (NOT NAMES) PLEASE E-MAIL THEM TO ME.***
Chapter 4, page 84: #8 under "Opportunities" the word "to" needs to be added in "University must continue ___ address student".
P. 56, paragraph 2, line 2: This statement makes it sound as though moving Student or Campus Counseling to Student Development was a recent move. It was not. Campus/Student Counseling has always been under Student Development; moving counseling to the Student Life Center to create the Wellness Center is new effective this fall. Hope this makes sense. mg
Page 57 "Strategic Planning Committee" is the heading for the paragraph, but "Strategic Positioning Committee" is referred to in the paragraph.
pg 58. Second sentence following the chart sounds awkward. "The presentation of the Strategic Positioning Committee reports to the Board influences future planning." Does it need to be reworded?
Pg 64. Is the Statement of Community Covenant quoted correctly -(8) adhere to the lifestyle guidelines as state (should be stated?) in the Student Handbook.
The chart with full time and part time faculty shows 97 part time faculty. Is part time and adjunct the same? How many adjunct teach for MNU.
Should the information about Pioneer marketing be updated?
***Chapter 4, page 84: #8 under "Opportunities" the word "to" needs to be added in "University must continue ___ address student". THIS CORRECTION HAS BEEN MADE. THANK YOU.***
***P. 56, paragraph 2, line 2: This statement makes it sound as though moving Student or Campus Counseling to Student Development was a recent move. It was not. Campus/Student Counseling has always been under Student Development; moving counseling to the Student Life Center to create the Wellness Center is new effective this fall. Hope this makes sense. mg THIS SECTION HAS BEEN RE-WORDED.***
Page 57 "Strategic Planning Committee" is the heading for the paragraph, but "Strategic Positioning Committee" is referred to in the paragraph. pg 58. Second sentence following the chart sounds awkward. "The presentation of the Strategic Positioning Committee reports to the Board influences future planning." Does it need to be reworded? THIS SECTION HAS BEEN RE-WORDED. THANK YOU.
***Pg 64. Is the Statement of Community Covenant quoted correctly -(8) adhere to the lifestyle guidelines as state (should be stated?) in the Student Handbook. THIS CORRECTION HAS BEEN MADE. THANK YOU.***
***The chart with full time and part time faculty shows 97 part time faculty. Is part time and adjunct the same? How many adjunct teach for MNU. THIS CHART HAS BEEN UPDATED WITH FALL 2008 STATISTICS. THERE ARE 84 FULL-TIME AND 99 PART-TIME FACULTY. FULL-TIME ARE THE RANKED FACULTY. ALL OTHERS ARE CLASSIFIED AS PART-TIME.***
***Should the information about Pioneer marketing be updated? THIS SECTION HAS BE RE-WORDED. THANK YOU.***
Chpt 4, pg 84, #8 -...must continue address... should be ...must continue to address..?